Erm… I think it would be better to show the whole lots… I always use my head “If I throw that photo under the bed for 1 year, and took it out what will i see in the photo?”
So you meation the “cutting the cake” as I now know what the photo was telling, but if you didnt put a word on it then I might thought they were putting the ring on, or reading a prayer together. :?
Cutting the cake ???? sorry to be harsh about this but you need to show the viewer what is going on…like this its just a snapshot photo…imagination is one thing but the picture here tells you nothing at all…sorry…I can see what you have in mind but it didn’t work.