I am afraid this doesn’t work for me. The image looks overexposed and oversharpened. I also find it a bit confusing where some of the grass is green at one end and grey at others. There is too much going on in the picture that the eye does not know where to start and stop.
perhaps if you used a shallower dept of field so that the drops on the strand of grass running from top right to bottom left were in focus and the rest were not it would make this image more interesting.