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50’s Inspired Shoot.

  • imlukee
    Participant

    Taking Photos to help a friend with her makeup and hair portfolio. Also second time shooting a model. No flash was used just light in the restaurant.

    1)

    Ellen Potts. by imlukee, on Flickr

    2)

    Ellen Potts 2. by imlukee, on Flickr

    Niallman
    Participant

    Hi Luke,
    If these are for a hair and make-up portfolio, you’d want to be getting in closer and showing if off.
    Theres a bit of an issue with sharpness in these, mainly the first one and you need to get some light in the eyes and across the face to bring out her features. Would be worth investing in a flash if you don’t have one.
    The white balance and colour could do with tweaking also.
    Fair play to you getting out there and being imaginative though. Nice model too.

    imlukee
    Participant

    Sorry its for a Television portfolio or somthing, My bad. Thank you for your feedback, Really trying to improve.

    Mark
    Keymaster

    The photos have gone?? :(

    imlukee
    Participant

    Crap! took them down off flickr because i was gonna re-edit them and reupload them to flickr

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