I don’t know if its my monitor or the process to get a “genuine” photograph scanned and uploaded but Arrons eye looks a wee bit soft to me.
As for the composition. Its a very touching image. Not the usual “smile for the camera” type of shot. Theres a lot of tenderness and trust in that image.
Great capture, beautifully composed and nice use of short depth of field. Can’t beat some real grain either, really adds nice texture to the photo. Reckon that’d make a nice B&W.