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This is all new to me but one i tried to do tonight. Comment and Critique welcome.
Edit: Took this on my first studio shoot, had i experience i would have lit the shoes a it better.
Thats just perfect!
Tones in the shot are spot on and the neg space is excellent!!
Fashion/Ads really are you niche girl!!!
Think you’re a bit of a natural at this type of shot! It’s as good as I’ve seen on any billboards or in mags!
Thanks a mil all, just playing around with a few ideas. Great way to relax :)
It is a great idea and it’s very well executed. Overall a great shot.
My one suggestion would be that the shoe in the shot is now the focal point, but it’s not very well lit. The shadows in the shoe blend into Josies outfit and it doesn’t stand out. This is really just nit picking, but if you could lift it every so slightly I think it would be an even better shot.
Very sexy shot -it has a sophisticated edge to it, I like it alot.. I do agree with Ciaran’s comments about the shoe..
Lorraine
I think the first one is better than the 2nd one – not sure what all the niche talk is about personally I think your other fashion ones are more interesting and better executed (just my opinion).
Thanks a mil all for the comments :) I agree totally about the lighting and it was the first thing i noticed when i came home from the shoot.
I definitely learned from that mistake! The shot is definitely really sexy, i think the subtle fetish adds to the shot – That said i would love to shoot some really outrageous stuff – any guinea pigs ?? Apply within :pAli wrote:
Thanks a mil all for the comments :) I agree totally about the lighting and it was the first thing i noticed when i came home from the shoot.
I definitely learned from that mistake! The shot is definitely really sexy, i think the subtle fetish adds to the shot – That said i would love to shoot some really outrageous stuff – any guinea pigs ?? Apply within :pok I will hold the reflector for that one.
Ali wrote:
Thanks a mil all for the comments :) I agree totally about the lighting and it was the first thing i noticed when i came home from the shoot.
I definitely learned from that mistake! The shot is definitely really sexy, i think the subtle fetish adds to the shot – That said i would love to shoot some really outrageous stuff – any guinea pigs ?? Apply within :pYou know my number girl :)
Rubber and handcuffs shoot yeah :)Ali, I don’t think you going to have much trouble making a career out of photography.
Thanks a mil Mark, i still have to justify spendin 6 years in college though before i can do that :|
and guys …. i’ll put your name down for that so :PHi Alison
Me again with some feedback,now getting addicted to this site.
This shot speaks the following to me Sophistication, Sexy,Gothic and Dark with the underlying tone of fetishism. This is a tricky one as corset and patent black shoe are near close in tone and contrast.
Would the following have helped
(1) Project shoe away from body allowing the hairlight to create contrast
(2) What about leaving original colour of shoe ad saturate to mid level. Guess if the shoe was red of course…
(3) Add more noise to this shot as will add more athmosphere to it.Your model has fantastic posture..lovely definition
Good Job..
Ben :)Thx Ben,
OOOh, Sophisticated, sexy Gothic and Dark.. and fetish :) Praise indeed. I definitely needed to create some contrast between the corset and the shoes. I went home and kicked myself when i saw the shots, that said i learned from it. If the shoes we’re a different colour i probably would have got away with how i lit them and there would have been enough contrast. I think there’s enough noise in the pic personally,
i think anything more would make the pic very surreal. The model is Jessica Hart, very very nice girl and very talented.Thanks a mil for the feedback :)
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