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Don’t Fence Me In!

  • Swordie
    Member

    C&C please.
    Doctor it if you feel the need!

    Not Pete the bloke
    Participant
    Valentia
    Member

    I like it. The texture of the paint is almost real. I think taking down the brightness in the bright part of the cloud would help a little though.

    Swordie
    Member

    Valentia wrote:

    … taking down the brightness in the bright part of the cloud would help a little though.

    Yes, I agree. That’s blown out to white. I’ll need to fix it.
    Thanks.

    SteveD
    Participant

    Random edit I know:

    Valentia
    Member

    Wahoo!!!!!!!! Where are my sunglasses. :D

    SteveD
    Participant

    Valentia wrote:

    Wahoo!!!!!!!! Where are my sunglasses. :D

    Yes, it looks like Riverdance in hell lol.

    Swordie
    Member

    Ahh now, Steve.
    Steady on.
    When I said “doctor it”, I meant within reason.
    I think your version needs to see the quack and get a prescription for its ailment!

    jlang
    Participant

    I think I prefer the original version.

    But, more seriously, I like the fact that the shiny paint isn’t blown out and the way the picture is just verious textures of simple colours – blue, green, yellow, white.

    PeteTheBloke
    Member

    The fence is sharp. The pattern is …well… interesting up to a point, but it’s still just a fence. I think it might be more provocative (or evocative?) if it had a used crisp bag tangled on a spike, or a ribbon tied round it, or a dog behind it or something.

    Just ignore me, I expect I’m not arty enough to appreciate it.

    Pete

    Rob
    Member

    I’ll echo Brandyman’s sentiment here and say “well seen”! On Valentia’s point, I actually quite like the blown out centre of that cloud and I think it adds to the image overall. Just a personal opinion. 8)

    Swordie
    Member

    Rob wrote:

    Just a personal opinion.

    That’s what it’s all about, Rob – personal opinions!
    Everyone’s point of view is valid.

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