Ahh now, Steve.
Steady on.
When I said “doctor it”, I meant within reason.
I think your version needs to see the quack and get a prescription for its ailment!
But, more seriously, I like the fact that the shiny paint isn’t blown out and the way the picture is just verious textures of simple colours – blue, green, yellow, white.
The fence is sharp. The pattern is …well… interesting up to a point, but it’s still just a fence. I think it might be more provocative (or evocative?) if it had a used crisp bag tangled on a spike, or a ribbon tied round it, or a dog behind it or something.
Just ignore me, I expect I’m not arty enough to appreciate it.
I’ll echo Brandyman’s sentiment here and say “well seen”! On Valentia’s point, I actually quite like the blown out centre of that cloud and I think it adds to the image overall. Just a personal opinion. 8)