First its great that you tried again and we get to see you working with all the good advice given from your previous shot (for me as a beginner its great to see it in the flesh )- fair play to u ;)
I like the desaturated colours .. for me it enhances the mood and is very suited ot the title.. I’m not sure the square crop is doing the best for it .. I’d be tempted to crop it landscape to the magic ratio placing the rose off centre.