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Hey Roberto.. love that the line of the wall is leading to the subject, however i’m not quite sure about the composition.
The subject i am presuming is the individual that is walking towards us, but there’s not enough really to hold my interest as they are so far away. I’d be tempted to crop the trees and person out of it and make the wall and the curve the subject? Just a crazy thought. :)Thanks Ali for the comment.
I did not want have the person biger because I wanted show the autumn colours and don’t have focus on the person…..
Here is your suggestion:
More what i had in mind, but maybe wall on bottom third, and crop 1:1.618 (tad long at mo ).
Hello,yes the image has all the right things going for it the leading curve of wall away to distance(rule of thirds), person adds to scale ie:we can assume the mass of the landscape how big or small it is, and finally the trees work well to frame it. What about satuating the colors a tad? Its a little flat for me but otherwise a nice pic.
Ben 8)ben wrote:
What about satuating the colors a tad? Its a little flat for me but otherwise a nice pic.
Ben 8)Thanks Ben for the comment. Please, feel free to edit the photo. Thanks.
I like the line of the wall as Ali said, and the grandness of the tree etc – I think the person at that distance does help to give either the picture look deeper, or to make the tree look bigger than it is, depending on the way you look at it – now I am no pro, I could very well be taking sh*te!
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