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Lions Shot. Help needed with the colour.

  • John Dunne
    Participant

    This is one of my favourite wildlife shots. However I’ve never been happy with the colour on it. It looks like a 1970’s kodak moment to me. Id love somebody to tweek it for me. Taken in Kenya, 2005.
    PLEASE FEEL FREE TO WORK ON IT. I’ve seen some excellent repair jobs done here.

    joolsveer
    Participant

    I had a quick go at it but I don’t know if it’s an improvement or not.
    Dave

    SteveD
    Participant

    Lovely shot John, good job.

    Here is my edit, if you want further details of the process let me know:

    John Dunne
    Participant

    Thank you both for such quick and excellent responses. I cant choose which is the better one. Maybe others might add their opinion.

    GilesKS
    Participant

    I prefer the colour of the original. The composition and exposure of it is good, the problem is that it is somewhat soft. joelsveer’s edit has been over-sharpened something awful, and the colours look wrong in SteveD’s. Oversaturated. joelsveer also seems to have blurred the background somewhat, which is strange because if anything it needs more texture, not less. I think the original would have benefitted from a slightly smaller aperture in that respect. Maybe some selective sharpening on the lions would be useful, but not too much.

    Valentia
    Member

    I must say I like the original too. Just a touch of USM is all it needs I think.

    gerardk
    Participant

    Thats odd – I just tried downloading it twice and both times got these wierd light blue lines across the pic horizontally (going through the upright lions nose).

    Id vote for the original too. I actually like the 70’s type daktari look of it (dont mean that in a bad way). I like the scars on their faces – it really makes it a more powerful shot. If anything I would probably do a very subtle levels adjustment.

    SteveD
    Participant

    GilesKS wrote:

    the colours look wrong in SteveD’s. Oversaturated. j

    Not oversaturated at all!! I think the contrasty look makes the image jump off the page. If you were producing a safari brochure….which image would you want? I know I would chosse the richer colours and contrasty image!

    Roberto
    Member

    Very nice composition. I don’t think you need adjust colours.
    I just added some contrast and decreased brightness + added a little sharpness.

    Fintan
    Participant

    John Dunne wrote:

    This is one of my favourite wildlife shots. However I’ve never been happy with the colour on it. It looks like a 1970’s kodak moment to me. Id love somebody to tweek it for me. Taken in Kenya, 2005.
    PLEASE FEEL FREE TO WORK ON IT. I’ve seen some excellent repair jobs done here.

    Its a lovely image and you’re right to work it to perfection.

    You saw the scene so you really know how this should look but heres how I like it, just slightly different to yours.

    Fintan
    Participant

    Oh while I’m at it, a while ago I made a watercolour out of it to print on canvas for you.

    John Dunne
    Participant

    Thank you all so very much for your help.

    Each edit was exceptional and each one perfect in their own right.

    Not just because I know Fintan , and not just becuase I think he is God with a camera. I think his first version is the most realistic. (like the watercolor too)Maybe it is because he has benefited form seeing the print.

    Thats not to take from any of the others either which i think are excellent too and I really really apreciate the input.

    This website is truly outstanding. Where else could I post a picture after lunch and have it worked on so many times by night.

    John Dunne
    Participant

    Just one other point. Joolsveer got the sky colour bang on. The sky in Kenya is remarkably lilac. Most peculiar. So well done joosveer on such a correct interpretaition.

    Thanks again everyone

    Ali
    Participant

    Really like this shot John and i like your edit. My variation on it:

    joe_elway
    Participant

    Here’s what I did in PS CS:
    levels – clipped lift portion of histo
    autocolour
    autocontrast
    slightest S shape possible in curves
    Filter – sharepn – USM: 70/0.8/0
    Noise Ninja (slight amount of noise reduction)

    NIce shot by the way. Like how the male appear dominant/protective over the two (apparently) females, as if they were adults already. The male is already starting to become an impressive looking amimal.

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