Redited the 1st and 2nd one (Deleted them off flickr so i thought i would reupload them). Also thought i would get some feedback of the new photos of taken.
Nice.. but seems something about them are too stiff…. they don’t look comfortable… and the one on the door, the model head are abit blur.. might need to re-shoot all and get them to be really relaxing or something! :-S
I like the concept, and like period portraiture in that style, especially the 40’s. For me though, your portraits lack life, as if the model or the photographer, or both, are a little ill at ease. Also, I think your shots would benefit from a longer focal length, maybe the 55mm end of the 18-55 you shot with. Good idea for a shoot, and I say keep it up :)
id echo previous comments, great idea, but models look a little uncomfortable and rigid. also the images are a little soft, and id add that the lighting is very “flat”.
Defo worth trying this again but with some external lighting. even if its just a flash with a difuser on an extension cable.