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A couple of shots for your critique.
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I like the first one. The only negative for me is that her shoulders seem to be a little hunched making the pose look a little uncomfortable.
In the second shot the I think there is too much out of focus foreground and the orange light in the background is distracting.
The shaft of sunlight on the face in the third shot is spoiling the shot for me.
Overall nice shots, with only a couple of small things stopping them from being really good.
Cheers Denis
You confirm my thoughts :)
I really do not understand who models hunch theirs shoulders! It makes them look sooooo deformed. 99% of them do the same think. You pick the camera, they put their hands on their hips and hunch their shoulders forward…why?? who invented this?? :lol:I really like the second one to be honest, the DOF works well and personally, I like the out of focus bit on the left.
The reflection in the first doesn’t really work for me, it’s too faint and therefore distracting rather than adding to the image. Hadn’t noticed the hunched shoulders until pointed out !
And yes, the light / shadow on the face on the third is strange, also the left hand placement seems awkward.
But all told, fair play, good light and colours in them.
-petew
Hi,
I really like the first two images (and as the other have mentioned, in particular the second one).
Unfortuantely, image three looks like the model is wearing a mask on my screen!!
Great work,
well done
first one looks good to me and think the reflection is fine.The 2nd is fine too but id be tempted to tone down the yellow building in the background as tis a little distracting. 3rd one is a no no for me, but thats only my view so well done to you.
thank you all for your comment. I totally agree with all the comments regarding the third photo. Big screw-up.
Cheers all.I always wondered why models did that thing with the shoulders :) I do like the the second the best I am not sure if the pink blob is a bit distracting or not as the left of the image is so strong.
Shame about the shadow on the face in the third I suppose its one of those things you miss in the moment :)
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