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All in a days work

Genie
Participant

June 26, 2008 at 1:11 pm

Still practising. :D Out in garden this morning. C&C welcome, as always.

Thanks,

Janine

PeteTheBloke
Member

June 26, 2008 at 1:56 pm

First one is better. The second one looks a bit soft in the important places.

Deebo
Participant

June 26, 2008 at 1:57 pm

Hi Janine
I think if you cropped in tighter to bring the subject more into frame these would instantly look better. A crop would help the subject become the focal point and you could
crop to create a more pleasing compostion or background

Cheers, Dee

Noely F
Participant

June 26, 2008 at 5:15 pm

Number 1 is sweet, a change of comp would really make it shine, play around with different compositions using a crop tool :wink:

Genie
Participant

June 26, 2008 at 6:25 pm

Thanks all for replying. I have cropped #1 further but I don’t think that it is sharp enough to be focused on this tight. What do you think? Feel free to edit it, have no problems with that.

Thanks,

Janine

oshead
Participant

June 26, 2008 at 8:11 pm

Hi Janine

Both of them are not bad shots. Next time you could try to get just a little bit closer. By filling the frame you remove the clutter. Try to think about placing the focal point of the image somewhere in the frame other than the center. You coulds also take a few of the same scene, recomposing between shots to find new and interesting angles.

Hope this helps.

Dave OS

Genie
Participant

June 26, 2008 at 9:06 pm

Thanks for replying dave, these shots are an embarrasment compared to yours. Someday……………………………… :D

oshead
Participant

June 26, 2008 at 11:50 pm

Not at all Janine. There is nothing imbarressing about these images. Techniques are learned as time goes by. It’s good to see you trying to learn. :)

Dave OS