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Andelucian landscape
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Hi Niall,
This seems to be very dark on my screen.
I think it is too dark.If this was your intention who am I to disagree.
John.
I like the b/w one, but it could be just a tad lighter, 1/3-2/3 maybe.
I would crop it a bit from the left and the bottom to bring the white houses closer to a corner… say, where crop it where the far away mountains and the ones closer “cross”, between the two peakes on the left, and around where you see the trees in the foreground. I would do something with the midtones, too, they look a bit flat… the highest mountain in the middle looks like it was behind some mist or something… it’s hazy.
it is quite dark and therefore unfortunately misses the right atmosphere, I’m afraid. I think, I would have placed the lower border of the frame a bit more up (let’s day just under the houses) so there would be more sky and clouds visible.
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