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Another Adare…
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Nice model, nice pose, although she doesn’t seem relaxed to me.
I find the light shining on her left eye and the right eye not visible is unnatural looking to me.
I’d like to see this with the contrast increased, although the highlights will not be complimented by this process.Hope this helps
There are to many horizontals in the photo the wall the rail track and the stones in the wall . the light shadow ratio was to much giving you blown out highlights. the pose has nothing flattering about it dont shoot up the nose ..
This is an interesting picture. I really like the potential story of what she may, or may not, be wearing under the raincoat. Technically there is room for improvement but the potential story is there.
All best
Si
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