At the window

[Luc]

November 3, 2007 at 1:13 pm

[jb7]

November 4, 2007 at 12:03 am

I like this one Luc,
lovely toning for a start,
and the model is relaxed and seemingly oblivious to the camera-

Its not without its problems-
he hair veils the face nicely,
but tends to accentuate the shadow on the nose-

And some of the drapery on the waist seems a little rough-

I might have seen this more in landscape format at this distance, I think-
and maybe a little closer-

Still a nice sjot-

j

[Luc]

November 4, 2007 at 5:27 pm

Thanks for your comments Joseph.
I take good notes about what you say on the drapery.
For the format, I am not so sure that landscape would have fit, as the elbow would have been cut.