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Autumn child
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I was trying out some new processing and I would like some opinion as to whether it is over processed or not?
I know the eyes are not pin sharp, my model got fed up and it was the best that i could do (you are allowed to be fed up posing when your 3!)
charley
Hi Charley
It’s very underexposed to be honest. I don’t think the comnposition helps it either. Maybe a portrait crop would work better or moving her away from the centre a bit. It just doesn’t look right to me as it is.
I agree with Ballyman,
it is very underexposed and so very little engagement with the eyes, which is very important.
And the crop of the leaf and top of head, as said doesn’t work so well.That said, the general processing, the autumnal toning seems very nice to me.
Martin
thanks for the honest feedback, I’ll keep trying….
I will try shot again and try to get better light and catch those eyes.
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