I think you’re onto something with the last one,
though the execution lets it down-
In my opinion, the flash beam is too tight, it needs to be widened, or have a diffuser added-
You’d need to be careful that none of the members are shading any others,
and for the sake of making an easily legible picture,
you might take more care in excluding anything that doesn’t add to it-
the curtain rail- not always easy to see when you’re taking it-
I like the shadows on the wall, it’s a good look-
would be worth getting that shot right-