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  • Faye Morgan
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    Hi

    I gave abstract photography a go today, something I haven’t really done before.

    Comments, suggestions welcome! :)

    MartinOC
    Participant

    Hi Faye,

    I don’t have much of a feel for this type of shot, but its not a bad shot.
    I would suggest that the background should be stronger, as it is a partly a study of colours, a strong yellow background would set it off better.

    The fact that the pattern’s big interest is at the bottom right and it is only part of the windows pattern, the eye is being drawn out of the photo.
    Generally it is good to draw the attention into the photograph.

    A a shot more composed around the part with the red and orange spots, with the blue lines leaving the photograph in a more balanced way, and the background more stronger yellow, might make a better shot.

    Just a suggestion.

    Martin

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