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Breaking Light
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I like it Mark but i think the horizon is a bit too central…! Perhaps a little less foreground would improve it. Lovely processing and conversion..!
Richie
Thanks Richie. I was in 2 minds about the horizon. I originally wanted to show the symmetry between sky and ground but
wasn’t sure if it would work or not. Will crop :)thanks
MarkVery nice picture i like the light and the tones. This has the making of a great picture. Something is missing in this shot for me and i don’t know what it is. I would do what Richie said and try to crop it differently and see what it looks like. Id work on it cause its a good shot. Sorry i cant be of more help
M
I’d definitely go with less foreground Mark. For me the sky makes this shot. I bet it looked good in colour too?
really nice Mark. Lovely tones. I’m not overly concerned about the horizon, but if i was to choose i’d lose some of the sky.
yes a bit more sea i think, but it makes a cool abstract if you rotate it 90 degs clockwise
Thanks for the suggestions. Dedalus you’re right its interesting on its side too :)
Just to add to the votes, love the shot, but lose some SKY. Don’t listen to those nuts who say lose the foreground, they’re all crazy, I tell ya!
Tim :D
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