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Hi John,
Nice idea again here.
Lovely location, happy couple and a beautiful day.
I looks to me as if you may have introduced some blur
in post processing I think it looks a little unnatural.
This is really a personal opinion and I could be totally
wrong.I also feel that the subjects are a little too central in the frame.
I would be tempted to place them towards the left third which I feel
would make for a more interesting composition.Sorry if I sound a bit picky but I might as well say what I think.
Cheers.
John.
good point John i prefer genuine and honest critique thats how you learn
Hi,
Just popping into the Jones’s meeting :D . I agree about the blur and the composition. You have plenty of room to crop a little and make the happy couple the centre of attention without jeopardizing your initial idea (ie square the picture).
Cheers
As above. If the couple are engaged in each other, rather than looking to camera, I think the “Scenic” shot works really well. When they are clearly posing for the camera, I think they need to be more significant in the frame.
All best
Si
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