Cinderella Communion

[Vidco]

May 13, 2009 at 9:44 pm

My niece wanted to look like she had work to do before making her communion.

[5faythe]

May 14, 2009 at 5:14 pm

Hi Dave,

#1 is, I think, a good idea.
She is doing something that is at variance with the way she is dressed.
I can’t help thinking that she is a little static like she was holding the pose for you.
If she had have been actually sweeping, maybe movement in the brush.
I’m being a bit tough I suppose but nicely taken.

#2 catches the cheeky pose well. I am presuming that was the intention.
DOF works well.

#3 is my favourite. I would prefer if she was looking into the lens. In my opinion
this would have really improved. Nevertheless I think it is really good.

Cheers,

John.

[Vidco]

May 15, 2009 at 8:10 am

Thanks for the comments John.
The pose in #1 had to be held or as you can imagine her mother would have killed us both for getting the clothes dirty!