I think it looks like a nice image -It looks sharo and there is good engagement from your model
Things you might improve in my oppinion:
– your conversion is a little too flat, more contrast ;)
– personally I feel the centred composition feels a bit ucomfortable, particular leaving the space either side …
and lastly – i’m not a fan of the white foggy vignette
Hope that helps.. not sure what kind of comments your after !!!
Sorry folks, just back home, found my fotki site can no longer be accessed.
will post again,
L thanks for the comments, as per your post……the comments i would like to see are those that detail what i have or have not done correctly in the processing stage. Im still pretty new to photoshop, and happy to receive comments on how to improve. PB