I like the idea behind the shot. A couple of suggestions that might improve it:
1 – The shot suggests you’ve gone for a central composition, but it’s not quite central. If this is what you were going for, crop a bit off the LHS.
2 – What post processing have you done (if any?). The colour and exposure look a little off (unless it’s intended like this). It could be my monitor (I’m at work, so it’s nowhere close to being calibrated), but the highlights look a little blow, and the wood looks too brown to be natural.