FYI, its much easier for people to give you critique if you only include a couple of images in a post.
So best to make a several posts, that way you should get a response on all your photos.
Find that most people will only comment on a couple of them, leaving the rest uncritiqued for you :)
Those rules vary from a forum to another so it is good to know.
As the photos are refered with a number, it is easy to critic, and if you make several post, the the post will disappear fast (if you a many people to post many post).