For me, to be honest, they don’t do anything. They are just dark and blurred and what you are shooting is not so appealing.
The subject doesn’t match the style of photography, as an old ruin might, but I think lomo is at its best with very colourful shots, whereas Holga works well in B&W, just my opinion from what I have seen on the web.
I looked at your website, your landscape shots, and others, are much much better. You can definately do good stuff! Its very nicely designed website too.
Btw there are better areas on PI to put your photos for C&C, the Low Fidelity section might be best for these.
hmm… not quiet sure where to go with this project now…better go there soon. something about collage and deadlines and tring to make work to them
irritates me mucho…