I like the sky and the surface of the water,very good. After looking at it for a while, the black strip in the middle nearly like separates the photo.
Not sure as I can’t tell how much you’ve done, but seems like you might have gone overboard with processing..?
All in all, I like it, composition, set up, the idea..but there’s just a niggle about it. Sorry,can’t put my finger on it.
Don’t know much at all about night shooting so just my opinion :)
I would be inclined to leave the water out altogether, the building and sky are
strong enough on their own, just a little tilt to it that needs a straighten. Nice image.