This looks like a very good photograph to me.
Seems to be focussed nicely in the important places.
Surprised some of our expert Macro & Close up members have had nothing to say about it. :oops:
I’m not one of those but thought I’d reply to give you a little encouragement.
Very nice! The detail in the face is incredible. Perfect sharposity!
A bit more depth of field might have been nice to get the two of them into focus.
The background is also a bit of a negative for me, I’m afraid. What is it, a jacket? Something a little more natural looking would improve this, for me.