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Doughmore, evening time.
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Ok, here goes……..quietly bricking. First photo ever shown to anyone other than family and friends.
Feel free to criticise any flaws. I’m wearing my thick skin and fireproof undies!
Only kidding but if I don’t know what I’m doing wrong I’ll never learn.
It’s not bad at all.
Technically it’s a simple composition, exposure is good.
The soft gentle colours are pleasing to look at.
Nice peaceful atmosphere about it.It’s safe… but pretty decent.
Thanks. I’m actually still a bit undecided and almost deleted it after I took it.
It’s nice but i don’t know if iI like it. If you get me.
I keep thinking something is”missing”Nothing missing here, wish mine were this good, great light, interesting to look at, perhaps a liitle less sky,keep it up, I’ll get the nerve some day soon.
I like it too for all the reasons the others have given.
Don’t know if it would improve it much but if it were my image I’d at least play around with a crop – cut a bit of the top and the bottom and take a bit off the left too as the surfers are maybe a little too close to the centre of the image – the good old rule of the thirds. It might make it too “safe”.
Good shot, glad you didn’t delete it and that you decided to share it with us. Hopefully the first of many.
Congrats on coming out of the closet!
Well I am glad you didtnt delete it anyway.
Its a pleasing shot. The only thing I can contribute is from a compositional point of view, maybe it would have been better with the surf dudes more to the left…… so if you’ve got time machine maybe you could organize that for me? Also Id have cloned out the little blank thing in the water to the right…. just for fun.
I cant wait to see one you actually like.
Well done.
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