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  • edg3
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    This is only my second real photoshoot with people so go easy on me!

    A friend of mine asked me to do them a favor and take some pictures of their make-up work for their website and portfolio a couple weeks back, we arranged a day and she got her friend to come down and we took a few shots. It went from mostly headshots to full-body shots. We’d to stop when my flash ran out of juice and i’d left the spare battery pack at home (doh!)

    Might not be to everyones taste and I’ve darkened it slightly with a filter in photoshop (again not everyones taste but it brought the colors out better i think)

    Ive had some issues with photoshop so i only got a couple done today and I’ll finish them up on Sunday.

    Any feedback is always appreciated.

    neilwhite
    Participant

    Ok , just my 2 cents here but it does appear a bit too dark on the right of the frame.
    Also, i think it could have worked better with the model looking into the empty space in the frame.

    edg3
    Participant

    like this?

    I have alot more i just havent gotten around to editing yet. Also i agree it is dark on that side, just got unlucky with sun and lighting. I’d a silver reflector up but the sun was behind the clouds alot of the time so even with the flash i didnt get enough light on that side.

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