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dublin city shots
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Mean-MachineParticipantkeveb08Participant
Great shots, really like the first one, love the way the bus looks stretched but the woman in the foreground is so still, well done.
Kev.
thalpinMemberI definitely agree about the contrasting motions in the first picture – great shot. The only suggestion I’d make is perhaps correcting the angle/rotation of the shot as much as possible (It is currently leaning to the left a bit too much I think) but only if that doesn’t require removing too much of the girl from the shot (since she is an essential element in it).
The second shot is also very intriguing, but my eyes seem to gravitate toward a vertical 6×4 crop in that shot, ie. starting on the bottom right, extend left and up using a 6×4 frame aspect (3:2 etc). The left 3rd of the picture seems to mildly distract from the subjects in the right-hand side.
Mean-MachineParticipantThanks a lot for the feedback. I’ll play with those again and will apply some of your tips.
C&C on the below also very welcome. Cheers.
snaphappyMemberI really love your eye for a composition people can learn the technical side of photography or can learn processing skills but the one thing you cant learn is the artistic side, you either have it or you dont and looking at your set you dont seem to struggle in that department
shutterbugParticipantExcellent set, particularly like the one with the lady in the red hat!
you have a good eye for street for sure :)Mean-MachineParticipantThank you, I wasn’t expecting the last comments to be so positive. :D
Below two more if you don’t mind…
These were taken yesterday at Stephen’s Green
JackiebalboaParticipantWhat a nice city Dublin :)
I rember the city alright !! such great time over there !Thanks for the pictures ! They are great :)
See you !
Jacki
James7Participantmiki gParticipantsnaphappy wrote:
I really love your eye for a composition people can learn the technical side of photography or can learn processing skills but the one thing you cant learn is the artistic side, you either have it or you dont and looking at your set you dont seem to struggle in that department
Totally agree with the above comment. These are some of the best street shots I’ve seen for a while. Well done
Jonnyp16vParticipantGreat shots, but the 1st one has to be my favourite, followed by the girl with the bike in front of the heart on the wall.
pilipoffMemberMean-Machine wrote:
Thanks a lot for the feedback. I’ll play with those again and will apply some of your tips.
C&C on the below also very welcome. Cheers.
The writings on the wall, I can translate them:
Alina, I love you
:)
streetshooterMemberI liked No. 4 as the closest to a street theme – even better if you could have captured the expressions :)
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Mean-MachineParticipantThanks for your comment streetshooter.
I know I need to get more confident to get closer to the subjects and capture the emotions. Would you have any tips for me on this?
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