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  • MartyS
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    Here’s a couple of shots from Dunfanaghy.

    Critical comments to help improve welcome

    Thanks

    PeteTheBloke
    Member

    Not so smitten by these as I was with your earlier posts Marty. No.2 seems a bit too empty for me and the eye is drawn to the people, who are too poorly defined to be a focal point.

    No.1 certainly has potential. I think a bit of photoshopping might help, but there’s a lack of sharpness. I wonder if stopping the lens down so far has introduced diffraction?

    Looks like you might need to dedust your sensor too.

    MartyS
    Participant

    Thanks for the comments Pete – will try and dedust the sensor too…

    Not sure why the first one didn’t come out clearer – maybe my aperture was too small and the wind too strong for my tripod

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