Not so smitten by these as I was with your earlier posts Marty. No.2 seems a bit too empty for me and the eye is drawn to the people, who are too poorly defined to be a focal point.
No.1 certainly has potential. I think a bit of photoshopping might help, but there’s a lack of sharpness. I wonder if stopping the lens down so far has introduced diffraction?
Looks like you might need to dedust your sensor too.