Homepage › Forums › Photo Critique › People › [ExposureMe.com] Ugly weather shoot. This topic is empty. [ExposureMe.com] Ugly weather shoot. AnonymousParticipant August 11, 2014 at 9:49 pm Hey! I just opened a website and I’m currently building it. You can find more photographs from this shoot quite soon at http://www.exposureme.com 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. clami79Participant August 11, 2014 at 10:39 pm overall good exposures, sharpness and processing. number 5 would be the favourite although i think the composition is poor. i also like 2/3/4. in number one you should have spotted the person walking behind with the umbrella, i find it distracting. keep at it :) Claudio AnonymousParticipant August 20, 2014 at 9:25 am I kind of regret not framing 5 a bit tighter too. Thanks for the comment! BMParticipant August 20, 2014 at 12:24 pm Numbers 1, 2 and 3 are pictures of a pretty girl not having a good time – looks like she is sitting on a wet bench. Number 4 might improve with just a crop of the face/upper body – blocking out the blurred stone in the foreground and removing the uncomfortable pose. Number 5 is worth another visit – the hair enhances her pretty face and the pose shows her elegant body, but the structure of the shot isn’t the best. Viewing 4 posts - 1 through 4 (of 4 total) You must be logged in to reply to this topic.