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  • colt
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    a few pics of a family wedding for critique i was to capture what the official photographer did not for all pics if interested http://picasaweb.google.com/farrder.67″ onclick=”window.open(this.href);return false;




    Mr T
    Participant

    Hi Colt, the link is not working at the minute

    colt
    Participant

    hi mr T, i think i have it sorled. it just goes to prove ( read instructions before use).

    Mr T
    Participant

    Hi Colt,

    I concentrated on the four individual links. These are only my opinions so don’t take any of these comments personaly.
    1. Might benefit from a closer crop in camera, for now clone out the telephone wire in photoshop. Sometimes this type of shot works best if you let the bride move around to a position where she is just about to alight from the car.
    2. Moving a few inches to use the texture of the wall as a lead in may have lifted this even more.
    3.Try this shot in B&W, I like the expression on the page boy’s face. A move of a few inches to the right to include the girls face might have aced it. Again its the luck of the draw where you are positioned when these moments arise.
    4. I like this shot.
    I notice from the exif data on the main gallery that you used an ISO of 200 for the interior shots, increasing the ISO for indoor shots can help greatly for handheld shooting.
    Again these are only my opinions.

    colt
    Participant

    thanks for the advise mr.T, as i am a beginner i am greatful of all advise. i had not taught of ithe iso increase for indoor. once again thanks
    colt

    Had a quick flick through the lot – like 307 – great to capture the emotion and fun of a wedding. 233 and 234 also good.

    would be good to see more of brides eyes – she loves to close them and hard on a sunny day due to squinting etc – this is where a longer lens may have helped you.

    colt
    Participant

    i have been on warehouse express looking at lenses cant pick between nikkor 18=105 or 70-200mm . advise please

    Mark
    Keymaster

    Just placed some img tags around the links so they’d be visible

    70-200 everytime for me but depends on what you shoot mostly.

    colt
    Participant

    thanks to mark for image tags placemant (did not know about that )…And thanks to richard for advice on the lens. (warehouse here i come or pixmania0.

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