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February Sunshine
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Shot from yesterday afternoon. I think it’s the first Sunshine I’ve seen for a month. :)
Si
Not sure this one does anything for me Si, and it’s not down to you really,
more the model. Compositionally it’s fine, exposed well, etc. Presentation does
leave a little to be desired (I’m not a fan of elaborate frames)…What’s killing it for me is the models pose and expression. The best way to achieve
a nice flat abdomen is through regular exercise and a healthy diet, not by breathing
in to the extent that your ribs become visible. Just looks unnatural and forced, not
to mention uncomfortable…Rob wrote:
Not sure this one does anything for me Si, and it’s not down to you really,
more the model. Compositionally it’s fine, exposed well, etc. Presentation does
leave a little to be desired (I’m not a fan of elaborate frames)…What’s killing it for me is the models pose and expression. The best way to achieve
a nice flat abdomen is through regular exercise and a healthy diet, not by breathing
in to the extent that your ribs become visible. Just looks unnatural and forced, not
to mention uncomfortable…Thanks Rob, I’m responsible for her pose (this was her first location nude shoot). You forget how much there is to do and how difficult it is for new models.
She wasn’t pulling in, just naturally this shape ad a bit cold. Her right hand bothers me more than her ribs. Her expression isn’t great and the light could have done with being a touch lower (firing a bit blind on the remote light). But… I love the colours :)
Thanks for the feedback Rob.
Si
Hi Si,
Although they’re not here, I prefer one of the other ones from this shoot.
I do love the location and the colour though.I love it!
a pair of wings is all she is missing!!
the colour and expression and stance just reminded me of a fairytail kinda setting for some reason!!
great pic.kombizz wrote:
Better lighting would improve your image.
How would you improve the lighting? Feedback welcome.
Si
Allinthemind wrote:
kombizz wrote:
Better lighting would improve your image.
How would you improve the lighting? Feedback welcome.
Si
:lol: Don’t pick on the poor guy
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