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First attempt at food: Coffee shop & Cupcakes
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Hi Sadbh,
I think the first shot has got potential – maybe convert to black and white to emphasize the forms and textures? I think the composition might have worked better with the cup more to the bottom left and the spoon leading out of the shot to the top right corner and shot in black and white …
Second one’s good, maybe just crop off the bottom 10% or so as the edge of the cup is a bit distracting?
Third: the girl’s legs and the clutter are too distracting
Fourth: there’s something I like about it – the colour’s great, very 60s feeling … I think the only real negative is that the edges of the tray are a bit wonky
Fifth: my favourite – I like the colours, the use of depth-of-field and the homeliness of the shot.
Well, that’s my tuppence worth anyway! Keep up the good work!
Alfa
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