These would be nice images, but they are way too dark. At least 1/2 stop if not more. I had a look at your flickr gallery and it’s the same there… I think, you need to decrease the brightness of your monitor.
I like dark, but the images are very grey, the water mainly ! it lacks any depth or life ? maybe a WB adjustment or a few tweaks in Lightroom would help ? Just personal opinion other than that the compisiton etc is nice.
Well, I didn’t say they are not good, but they would be dark if printed and maybe put behind glass… I have dark images like these, and they didn’t look great at all when I actually wanted to hang them on the wall. Others might like it though.