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First Model Shoot
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Ok so this was my first proper model shoot so please feel free to add your opinions good or bad!
Thanks for Looking!
NeilWas the session some punishment or result of a lost bet? She looks like she wanted to kill you :D
Also the highlights are blown out and in the last shot the foot shouldn´t be cut. But in general they´re not bad, I think that next time it could be more or less flawless.MMX wrote:
Was the session some punishment or result of a lost bet? She looks like she wanted to kill you :D
Ha ha!! My thoughts too….she looks fit to kill
Apart from the stare (which might be from rough concrete and cold water downbelow) :) I like the subject .
Now these are my opinions only and I am no expert so with the in mind…
In 1 and 2 to me because of the contrast beteen the white dress and the background it might have been better trying the black dress here or just exposing so the dress and face where better exposed and let the background be dark spot meter for this maybe on the face and use the settings for a manual exposure.
Aslo in 2 as the bum looks lower than the feet this can be an uncomfortable pose maybe the other way round?
In 3 the contrast is high which makes the rocks look great but might be a bit harsh on the face i think a reflector here to fill the left side of the face would have helped but that requires a helper and a reflector :)
Hope this helps
Mark
THanks for the comments guys, its all appreciated good or bad!
The stare would have something to do with how cold the water was and the fact there were huge jelly fish floating around in it!!
will try with reflectors next time and maybe a second speedlight.
Neil
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