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  • crox225
    Participant

    hi guys

    would like some advice and comments on my pics please, not sure if this is gonna post or not, still dont have the hang off how to get it on this

    phil

    Mark
    Keymaster

    Hey Phil,

    Just corrected your link. You were linking a the flickr web page where the photo is displayed but not to
    where the photo actually is on flickr, depending on the browser you’re using you can right-click on a photo
    and do a ‘copy location’ or ‘properties’ to find out what the actual link it.

    If you edit your post above (edit button top right), you’ll be able to see what it looks like.

    cheers

    crox225
    Participant

    Thanks Mark, much appreciated….its like learning to walk again he he, ill get there slowly

    tks again

    phil

    miki g
    Participant

    Hi Crox 225.
    Not sure about if this is people or fashion, but I think it covers both. :D
    The image is symmetrical & the subject is very central in this. I would place her closer to the rail on the left as she is facing that direction, perhaps with her hand on the rail. I would also use a longer lens or wider aperture to try to put the background more out of focus, but that’s just me. Otherwise I think it’s a good shot. Well done

    crox225
    Participant

    Hi Miki,

    tks for the comments, didnt even think about putting it under fashion oops…hardest thing i found was giving her direction and trying to shoot some good pics too, she seemed happy though, although took alot of shots with only a handful worth keeping…i guess thats the norm?

    phil

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