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Garrettstown today – updated with two pics 06feb2012

  • tsergairl
    Member

    three shots from todays morning

    1

    2

    3 and more artistic :-)

    thank You for watching

    all cc welcome :-)

    chris

    connie
    Participant

    Love the artistic one. :) The other two are nice also, but I do love the composition of the 3rd as well as the creativity x

    tsergairl
    Member

    Thanks Connie for reply :-)

    Celticpics
    Participant

    Hi , I think the third one is the more interesting one.
    the composition is better than the others, wich gives it more appeal.
    i would love to see it in a lighter hdr treatment (if it is hdr…?).
    nice work.
    cheers. Philippe.

    tsergairl
    Member

    HI Philippe it is HDR :-)

    tahnks for reply :-)

    Paul Wh
    Participant

    Hi tsargirl, I’d go with No1, I’m no fan of HDR so I don’t like that part of the image but I do like the composition of the 1st image, the swirl of movement on the water ties the center of the image together,

    phillip
    Member

    all three shots look soft, but that could be me with old age, processing is over cooked but could be the look you are going for, composition wise could be better, cant see any interest just could be bold colors distracting me.

    alpaca
    Participant

    Really like the composition of the third shot, I personally don’t like hdr that over cooked but if it’s what your after sure why not :)

    pelagic
    Member

    Paul Wh wrote:

    Hi tsargirl, I’d go with No1, I’m no fan of HDR so I don’t like that part of the image but I do like the composition of the 1st image, the swirl of movement on the water ties the center of the image together,

    Tsar girl. I’m with Paul on this one. But just because the composition ties it together doesn’t make it say anything to me beyond pretty landscape.

    In a lot of your other images I like that you have something say or some observation on the subject matter.

    Sorry that sounds negative, but you are a good story teller and pretty pictures don’t light my fire. When you finish school and start getting paid, clients want more than just the subject. They ask for a point of view or a story. For example, a great portrait isn’t just a likeness. It tells us something about the person. Something take the photographer saw and captured. A box of corn flakes can have personality.

    ted
    :::;;;;;

    tsergairl
    Member

    Than to Everybody for answers :-)

    tsergairl
    Member

    well , ive got two more in hdr :-)
    4

    5

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