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Glendalough
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You’ve got all the elements you need here.
A good subject,
Srong background, midground, foreground elements,
An overhanging branch to help with the framingBut put it all together and the composition doesn’t quite all fit together somehow. All I can suggest is to walk around the location before you even take the camera out of the bag to see if there is a position that you can use all these elements to your advantage.
Still very peaceful and restful. Just the kind of place I love to be.
Andy
I think you need to add a bit more blue to it..it’s a tad bit too yellow for me…
yeah this is quite nice … i was round there on a shoot a couple of weeks ago doing an early morning, really peaceful place – loved it .. it was my first time to that area.
cheers
lukeThanks for the comments i did struggle with this one a bit as it was taken in jpeg format when i first got my D70
i thought about a b&w conversion so i might have a look that.Mick
Hey Mick,
Did a quick edit (hope you don’t mind). Just a sharpen and colour balance.
hmmm…i prefer the original . . think there is something nice going on with the colours.
cool
lukeI like what Ali did, it’s more natural looking. Less red in it. It does need some CCW alright.
Thanks to all for their comments and suggestions.
Ali
No problem with you doing an edit it looks goodJoe / Podge
Just had a closer look and and it does need a slight CCW it was tough trying to keep balance in the middle of the stream just
glad i didn’t fall in.It just goes to show you what a fresh pair off eyes will see.
Mick
I like Ali’s edition. It’s more life and ‘crispy’. But I agree with Andy about the position.
I would’ve used a longer shutter speed, waited for better light and chosen a different angle.
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