good or bad

[marble master]

July 28, 2008 at 7:14 pm

didnt know what section these come under so stuck them here looking for feed back thanks

[b318isp]

July 29, 2008 at 1:02 pm

First needs more light. It seems soft too. Second is better lit, but the razor spoils it and blocks the text on the bottle behind. I think that both pics may have better compositional aspects to be found.