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  • ciaran
    Participant

    One from the quick ramble this afternoon… A very relaxed gentleman, rolling a cigarette for himself.

    GrahamB
    Participant

    Nice shot Ciaran. The pose is great and well spotted.
    It would be great to see a little more of his face but thats
    a minor thing.
    One question though. when i look at it on my monitor the background looks
    grainy but the subject doesn’t. Is this just the DOF messing with my head or is
    there something else going on.

    ciaran
    Participant

    Nope.. noise was applied across the whole image evenly, so it should be/is present in the subject too. I think it’s more evident in the background because the shallow DOF has removed/burred detail making the noise more evident.

    Thanks for commenting.

    Expresbro
    Participant

    Great shot Ciaran..nice moment captured. I’m curious though…did he actually pose for this or was it a candid? He almost reminds me of one of those classic nude models you always used to see in cheesy movies from the fifties and sixties. Except he has his clothes on of course….thankfully :wink:

    Rob
    Member

    Lovely composition as usual Ciaran, beautifully framed.
    Love the conversion too, though I’d be interested in seeing
    this without the added noise (just to see the difference of course).

    Rob.

    earthairfire
    Participant

    Cracking composition and nice use of DOF.

    I’d maybe distort the image to pull the bench(?) tp the horizontal…

    Tim

    ciaran
    Participant

    Cheers everyone

    Expresbro wrote:

    Great shot Ciaran..nice moment captured. I’m curious though…did he actually pose for this or was it a candid?

    Definitely candid and completely oblivious to the world around him.

    Rob wrote:

    though I’d be interested in seeing this without the added noise (just to see the difference of course).

    Your wish is my command :)

    earthairfire wrote:

    I’d maybe distort the image to pull the bench(?) tp the horizontal…

    Yeah I gave it a go, but to disastrous results… I’m considering a tighter crop instead.

    Thanks for commenting.

    Rob
    Member

    Cheers for that Ciaran.

    Quite a substantial difference in mood between the two, which
    really surprised me. What doesn’t surprise me now is that you opted
    to go for the one you did. The graininess really sets it off nicely,
    gives it a much grittier, more ‘street’ effect.
    Incidentally, I don’t find the horizontals at all jarring and I’d be
    loathe to crop this anymore than you already have. Then again,
    what the hell do I know…

    Rob.

    ciaran
    Participant

    Cheers Rob and everyone.

    Rob wrote:

    Incidentally, I don’t find the horizontals at all jarring and I’d be
    loathe to crop this anymore than you already have.

    The slanting chair was a distraction… fixed now though :)

    Thanks for commenting.

    Is his leg actually giving off light or is that an optical illusion?

    Allinthemind
    Participant

    Looks good to me…. Nice “layout” of the composition, good depth, interesting subject, nice tonal range :)

    Made me look more than once (the best measure for me)

    Si

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