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Herbert Park morning

  • blacktopjunkie
    Participant

    Feels like there’s something missing from this one?

    C&C appreciated.

    jb7
    Participant

    Its quite bright,
    with maybe too much foreground,
    but It might still be missing something-

    You could maybe have a look at Mick’s work-
    and see if you can get any inspiration for processing this one-

    j

    blacktopjunkie
    Participant

    Had a look at Mick’s work as suggested and definitely see where you’re coming from, but I felt that a frosty morning, as this was, has a greater effect if it’s bright.

    I have a tendency to leave in big foregrounds and backgrounds and agree here again it’s a bit too big, but I wouldn’t like to cut too much off as i think it emphasises a sort of “stand alone” quality in the trees??

    blacktopjunkie
    Participant

    Nope you’re right. My apologies, a crop does tidy it up a lot without losing the effect. I think?

    bingbongbiddley
    Participant

    Cropped version looks a lot better but I just think the sky’s too bright. There’s no detail in there at all. How early in the morning was this?

    Sorry to be so negative. :)

    blacktopjunkie
    Participant

    No probs. It was about 8.30 in the morning. There’s no detail cos there wasn’t anything actually there except a wall of mist. The sun was just breaking through to the left of the photo.

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