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Hibiscus
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Too many droplets, they look like polka dots, be better rather more randomly spaced.
I’d like the centre of the flower a bit sharper, perhaps. May be wrong though.Personally I don’t have a problem with the droplets. In fact I find this image quiet pleasant, but not faultless.
It lacks a little contrast and sharpness for me. There’s a lot of texture and fine detail in those petals which is a little lost at the moment. I think that the petals could take a little brightening too.. well at least on my monitor.
Some real subtle touch ups and I think this improves vastly. I’m not sure if the extra space on the LHS does anything for the composition as is.
J
Well personally…I think it’s fine~~~
It’s a Rose of Sharon after all..
you can never go wrong with hibiscus!
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