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Holocaust Memorial, Berlin.
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I know some people will like the person in the shot, but for me I think if the person wasn’t there, than it would have made a more interesting composition with more abstract shapes, I’d cut down on the vignetting a little too, as I think it’s done a bit too much here. Otherwise nice taken on the memorial.
Thanks for the feeback… appreciated and noted.. I’ve re-uploaded the image…
Another fine shot Alan. The person adds a nice element to the shot. Nice strong lines lead nicely to the woman in the centre of the frame.
Like this a lot
DeeHi Alan,
I personally think this one of the finest shots on this site. I am constantly drawn back to view it.
Have you printed yet ?Adrian
Hi Adrian,
wow, thanks for the compliment man.. much appreciated. I haven’t yet had this one printed, but there is a few that i have earmarked and this is one..
cheers,
alani cant believe i didnt have a look at this until now.
beautiful shot alan, definatly worth printing. anymore you have from the memorial to post?
Hi Alan,
I’m very surprised that this has not had more comments. I love the composition the lines are fantastic and the woman could not be more perfectly posed.
Depth of field and processing are great, its a really strong shot.
I agree with PeL, the vignetting is too strong for my taste too. I think the figure gives a nice point of interest and scale. Unfortunately, this particular figure does not work for me though. Someone with a thoughtful/solemn/interesting look would suit the scene given its a memorial but the woman looking at her camera LCD screen (I think) just doesn’t do anything for me.
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