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That’s a nice picture Tommy,
very pretty girl-The fleece doesn’t look too good though-
its a large part of the picture,
so maybe something else next time might be better-I find the track leading out of the picture on the right a little bit of a distraction too-
j
She’s a stunner, Tommy. It’s hard to crit a pic when the subject
is so distractingly lovely.Her nose (paradoxically) looks a bit hot, and there appears to be a thing
on her head (glasses? Alice band?) that doesn’t belong there. However,
you’ve captured her beauty wonderfully – so it’s a good shot from that
point of view.Biddy wrote:
Help!.
I can’t see any picture.I’ll describe it for you if you still can’t see it. Words won’t do justice though.
PeteTheBloke wrote:
Biddy wrote:
Help!.
I can’t see any picture.I’ll describe it for you if you still can’t see it. Words won’t do justice though.
:lol: :lol: :lol:
I can only imagine your florid description Pete…
She’s a stunner all right as previously mentioned.
The fleece isn’t great, though I find the butterfly bracelet
even more of a distraction as it seems the band of it is the
sharpest point of focus. The conversion to mono could do with
a boost in contrast, though that will increase the hotspots on
both nose and knuckles. If you shot in RAW it might be worth
reprocessing to try to eliminate this issue.
Definitely worth another visit to the woods though. Your model
has a fantastic face…Rob.
cheers lads for the advice all taken on board, its amazing how all the little things add up but i guess thats what its all about, yea brilliantly enough the model is my girlfriends little sister so i have unlimited use whenever i need it haha
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