This isn’t bad for a first post I must say.
It’s nice and contrasty for one thing, and the lettering in the background adds to the effect.
The only thing you need to look out for are those blown highlight in the face, although being the material it is it might be hard to expose correctly (and it looks like you’ve done a decent job anyway!)
You might try a more interesting compostition next time though, as the angle is quite…dull.
Don’t mean offense by that by the way! Great first post hope to see more!
Relly nice picture. like the fact the text is cropped in this image. Would make a good experiment in DOF to throw the writing further out of focus, just a little bit. Look forward to seeing more