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Jus messin
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Hi Flipsake.
You’ve asked for some C&C..so I’ll give you my first impressions here.
Firstly..as a family snap..it’s lovely..a nice moment between (I assume) your Kids.
Technically though there are a couple of things that catch my eye straight away that I could point out so you could watch for it next time.
Cropping off their feet at the bottom is a bit of a no-no…so either go back a little and include them..or crop up further along the shot.
Personally I think this shot would have worked better with a Landscape orientation….leaving some room on the right for them to move into.
Anyway..that’s just a couple of pointers..I’m sure one or two others might have some more.
Cheers
Robbie
8)Tnx Robbie,I tightned up on the shot and maybe it looks better. I think the kids were unaware the shot was been taken so they were uninterrupted and continued “Jus messin”. I will try out your suggestions next chance I get. Sound! Flipsake….
Why do you keep adding Flipsake…. next to each post you do?
We know who you are by the box on the left with the Kill Bill chick and your name above it.
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