For me, #1 and #4 are the best (from a fashion perspective). Nice relaxed & natural looking poses. As already mentioned, more emphasis should be given to the clothing & try to avoid any crumpling of the fabric if possible. Overall, the set itself as a set of portraits is nice. Well done.
:):) It was over 3 years ago. I used to have plenty time then to carry on all softboxes,umbrelas and lights:)
I agrre they are not realy fsshion shots:) they are not at all i think, protrait shots into family album!