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Kiss
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Very erotic image Susie. Beautiful mouth and the blown white
doesn’t take away from it at all. My one criticism would be that
you’ve cropped too tight on the left, and it might improve the
image overall if we could see the corner of the mouth.
Aside from that, I love it.Rob.
I agree with Rob re the corner of the mouth.
It would also help if you resized the image a bit smaller before posting.
This would have a couple of advantages, firstly, more people might comment as it is easier to offer
a critique when you can view the entire image on your screen rather than having to scroll.
Secondly, on larger images noise etc. becomes more apparent, a smaller image will appear sharper and
with less noise.
If I was to make any suggestion, it would be to have no skin tone whatsoever, just the red lips (to include the corner of the mouth :D )Best regards
Kevin
Sorry Susie but it does not appear to me as abstract photo. You can see clearly that it’s the mouth.
I really like this one Susie.
The picture is a little over cropped.
It would be great if you could include the whole mouth.
I love the tongue ring sticking out.Really sensual image though.
Graham
As far as I remember that pic is not actually cropped, it is taken a bit bad way so that left corner is just missing. (well, it is not so easy to take photo ’bout your own mouth)
maybe I have to take similar photo again somay, and try to improve it by taking both corners of mouht in the picture :)Thank you for you advise to improve that pic.
Roberto> yes that pic is propably in wrong place, Im not allways so sure what all these “sections” for pics includes. So I maybe underestanded that work “abstract” just a bit funny and different way.
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